I cry like a caged bird
Let me fly
I want to reach the sky.
I can handle the rough wind, rain and storm.
Do not protect me,
Let me flee
My soul is young
The coldness of your soul
Is killing me
I want to experience life
Let me make mistakes.
You are flawless
You are perfect
Perfection is boring.
I wish you had little malice in you
You are pale without malice
Pale is lifelessness.
Blame on me for laying excessive emphasis on parenting but I see the first part of the verse as a plea of a child to the parent to be free, to make mistakes and be proud to learn from them. Perfection, it is really boring. I feel there is nothing perfect.
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Thanks Anamika…I gave a new perspective to my rambling.
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You gave a new perspective to my rambling
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Pale is lifelessness! I found such a connect to your poem Balaka. I am one who likes perfection in everything. But my kids have taught me there is beauty in imperfections too! I am learning that late in life 😊
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This poem is written about the inner child in me who often feel suffocated. However readers are relating it to their kids…and am happy for that. This was just an occasional rambling on a ‘not so good day’ and am happy that you liked it and found a connect. Getting appreciated by a superb poet like you really means a lot Radhika.
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Good. I liked the theme of the poem.
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Thanks Nikita
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for a bad day, this is good. Hang in there sister.
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Thanks Gary
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I came here looking out for your intense piece of fiction writing and I am greeted with poetry. Nice Balaka. Like a whiff of fresh air. Love and Cheer!
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Thanks a lot Natasha
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we all need a bit of spice in our lives … Hope your day ends in a happier note.
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Thanks a lot Rajlakshmi..I am feeling good now…
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wow! Lovely poem, Balaka!
Wishes for a good rest-of-the -day.
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Thanks, Moon
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Chin up and hang in there for a lot of good is unfolding too, just hidden behind all this angst…..
And yes I blew a wish on a star to open the cage – did you fly away little bird?
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Awwwww😘😘😘😘😘
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I flew away and watched ‘lipstick under the Burkha’
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perfect!!! I loved that movie to the core- all those repressed emotions and seeing them comeout so brilliantly in this movie- super stuff!
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I also loved it
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Great poem…….!!!
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Thanks
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Welcm
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