My mom always got scared whenever I stood at the edge of the terrace wall. I often did this to tease her. I loved to see her scared and worried. She always said she would die because of me. My irresponsible antics will lead to her death.
After I shifted to America, with my neighbours, I often stand at the edge of the terrace remembering my mother and my home in Syria. I also hope that one day I trip and fall.
No!! I should live. I cannot waste this life that my mom gifted me twice. Once, by giving birth and second by shielding me from the bullets, while we were escaping our hometown. She was right when she said that I would become the reason for her death.
This post was written based on the prompt given by FFfAW Challenge.
Picture Courtesy: Grant Sud
Very nice take on the prompt. I like the way you weave your stories, Tina. It creates a vivid picture in my mind about the characters. Loved this one too!
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Thanks a lot Di
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A heart moving tale, Balaka. Beautifully written, sadness and happiness intertwined.
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Thanks a ton dear
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Welcome, Balaka!
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Oh! That’s a poignant one!
An imaginative take on the prompt, Balaka!
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Thanks Shilpa
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Well done, Balaka. Nice job in bringing a backstory within the flash fiction. Cheers, Varad
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Thanks varad
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So believable…tugs at the heartstrings.
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Thanks so much…am so glad you liked it
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Wow! Amazing work!
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Thank you Swetha
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Amazing!
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Thanks
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What shall i say1 You bowled me over with this poignant story. Lots of character, a great voice and spot on backstory. Well written, Balaka.
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Thanks a ton Neel. I am glad you liked it.
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Such a touching story Balaka! His mother gave her life to save him and he realizes the importance of his life. Great story!
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Thanks… I am happy you liked it.
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Wow! Such a simple yet impactful story. Beautifully done and vivid.
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Thanks Parul
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Great take, such a tragic way for a mother to die. I’m glad the kid realises in the end what he owes her and how he must go on living.
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Ya…he did realise…thanks for the lovely comment.
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A poignant take. Very well crafted.
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Thanks a lot…I am glad you liked it.
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Now that is one heck of a reason to live! Ohhh, the sacrifices mothers make. I love this
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Thanks a lot Ameena. I am glad you liked it
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Ohhhh 🙁 such a heartbreaking tale. War has created many unintended, innocent victims. Great tale, Bala!
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Thanks Shweta dear
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You’re always welcome! ❤😊
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